I like it
for the first flash post on NG you did a much better job then many others, also I like the idea of talking madness, why not, many make their own madness movies and change lot of things, so it's something new. Like the others say, you need to make it more fluent and work on it, but I'm sure that you'll become better in flash, I personally have no idea how flash works but I bet that your flash was already a lot of work, wish you much success and inspiration on your following submissions
greets hb87